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Note from the translator:
This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing with the original. I gave my best not to change the contents BUT. Sometimes I just had to. The thing is that Kyoux is playing a lot with form and tense, and that made it that bit more difficult to translate. I wanted to leave as much as possible as it is in the original so that the atmosphere and her writing style is reflected. And that might get English people confused sometimes, as it probably would be written differently if the correct English would be used. Of course you'll find mistakes in the text, so please instead of mocking my language skills, just sit back and enjoy a beautiful love story. I decided to try and translate it because I adore their story so much that it would be pity for others not to be able to read it. Especially since the artwork that goes with it is so beautiful. This piece took ...2h... hours to translate, so if you don't like the way it's done, please pay me some respect for the hours I've put into this and don't read. But I really hope you'll like it as much as I do.




10. The Blonde

I feel as if I am on a seesaw.
As if one minute I'm one person, then the next I'm someone else.

Earlier in life I was ruled by my mind and reason, which I rejected by telling Niv everything that bothered me. Well, almost everything.
When I lost him my body was taken over by my heart.
But only for a brief moment because eventually, what can I say... I started to think with my dick.

And that splits me into two.

Marcin-heart and Marcin-dick.

HA HA...

My heart....
My heart is a bit lyrical comparing with the non poetic penis. And it doesn't matter how stupid it sounds.
That stupid part of my body is quite patient. But still needs a lot of attention and tenderness.
And actually believe it or not it can understand quite a lot.
It knows that I doused the Redhead with my feelings.
I poured into him all that is poisoning him now, just like it was poisoning me.
Because my feelings have never been clean. But I can't help that.

I felt better after I did it.
As if someone sucked the venom out of me.
As if someone ripped the dark thin net of a heavy fabric off of me, through which I watched the world.
Everything became clear and straight forward again.
Almost everything.

Because new thoughts and new desires surfaced.
New needs.
When I followed my heart and reason I didn't think about my sexual needs so often. And the eventual adventures took place rather because of the need of being close to someone. But when one element disappeared my life was taken over by my body's desires.

And yes.
I want to drink him bad.
I want him to quell my thirst.

And this is where I argue with myself.
Because on one hand I want to take him already, but on the other hand...I do understand that the Redhead needs more time.
I'm getting a brain fry because of that and the snake on my neck is hissing more frequently.
I try to sate myself with sweet drinks. I drink them only to make me feel worse.
I turn off my heart when I do it with strangers.

Every day I wonder when is it going to come out. When he will notice that?
And when he does if that will spoil any chance I could have with him.

Slut.
A simple slut.

I run 'cause I can't stop,
My body like a machine
Without control is racing forward.*


We don't talk to each other much lately. The Redhead is more silent that usual and I have this feeling that I don't have the right to start any sort of conversation.

He comes home later than usual.
Twice a week he has his ninja classes... but what about the rest of the week?
It bugs me...
I don't want him staying at his place.
I don't want him to try and mend whatever went wrong between them.

Although it's not like that...not that I don't want to...
I'm simply scared.

The thoughts running through my head
Like the supernova's surface
Light up violently...


I don't know what I would do if I didn't have that premonition that it all will work out somehow.
Between us.

I don't know… what I would do...


~~
Today we had a talk with Winter's manager.
And no, we didn't see Winter in person even for a second.

What did we find out?
That it's ONLY ME who will be going away to train my voice.
Leave everything.
The band, school...

The Redhead.

For a few months.

It scared me. Because it is such a big chance that we got, but it would be me who would carry most of the load on my shoulders.
Besides... Firka has troubles with her work and we don't know what is going to happen. She probably counts on me. Because it is a chance not only for myself but for the whole band.
And they want it. I can see it.

And I... to be honest... I don't want to go. I prefer the silent Redhead than being alone...
Knowing that at night there will be no one next to me.

His telling me... to go, is not helping me either. Not at all.


~~
We were playing sitting deep in our cushions. Concentrated on the game, in silence.
The Redhead came back home at a reasonable hour this time round.
It made me happy.
He talked to me normally.

Yesterday I told him a few things about... Winter. About my doubts and hopes concerning that trip.
About the fact that I miss him... just like that... like a friend.
That I need to have more talks with him, that I need to spend time with him.

I told him that... just like that. Without anger, sorrow or animosity.
Just like that...
He smiled and gave me hug.
Soothing my heart.

And harder before I lose my breath
Tense up, fill with fire,
I turn into a living torch.


- Niv?
- Yes? - he replied still looking at the monitor.
- Can you pause for a minute?
He looked at me. Stopped the game with a questioning look on his face.
- I just wanted to tell you that I won't push myself onto you anymore - I squeezed the pad in my fingers - because I respect your space. And although I'd love to, I won't cross the line. But that doesn't mean that... anything changed... you know, with me...
- With your feelings - he said, surprising me a little.
- Yes, my... feelings. For you.


~~

I fucked the first I could get in the club.

He had nice back.


I live harder, feel and desire harder,
But I pay more,
Everything I touch burs down.



~~

The Redhead came back home in the early morning... He didn't go to Uni.

I moved away from him. I despised touching him at that moment.


~~

He didn't come back after school again.
We had a few beers with Firka. We talked. I love that girl. I can talk to her easily about all things - in contrast to him.
I don't get it.

Firka asked me if I'm not going too far with all this.
And how am I supposed to stop since I'm head over heels in it?

She said that maybe the Redhead is simply afraid that he won't be able to fulfil his expectations.
But I just wanted...

Hehe...yeah.
Everything.
I wanted everything.


She noticed...that he looks differently at me. More often. He talks about me when I'm not around.
Great. Pity that I am the only one that can't see it.

She finished the conversation with: Maybe the fact that you are near him all the time stops him from thinking about you that way. The way you would like him to think about you? And YOU can't think about him differently either. Soberly.
Maybe you to need to take a break and spend some time separately? Take a time out for a breather?

I should leave him again?
Funny.
The history would make a full circle again.


Difficult is my ginger fate
Difficult is my ginger fate
Da di da na ginger la
Ginger fate
Fate o'mine

*The words are from the Polish song "Rudy" - Coma.
[link] : )


:bulletred: Polish version: [link] :bulletred:

Chapter translated by amazing: :iconschiotka:

ALL TRANSLATED CHAPTERS: [link]

Chapter 01 - [link]
Chapter 10
Chapter 11 - [link]


Descriptions of characters: [link]

If you read it, please comment ;* It's very important to me. Then I know that someone reads this xD
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EnniFerna Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It took me some time to get used to that style, but I got the hang to it and cant stop reading now.
Thanks
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MissMoxxxi Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Okay, I comment...
Fuck, the whole thing is great...this story is so awesome, I've got lost in it!
Yesterday night I've read till morning and now again ;)
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Jenmen30 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
The song is awsome too bad its not in english
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
They recently released the album in English. But the words are quite different :C

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Gutting-Butterflies Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I love it with the song lyrics this time.
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Kyoux Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
:heart:
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BeaLovingLife Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
He's going away OO
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XaxyBoo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this story so much :D The characters are all amazing in their own way and the plot is complicated and interesting...and it pulls you in, so deep, that you can't get out ^^ You are amazing for writing this :hug:
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Kyoux Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
;__:

thank you very much :hug:
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XaxyBoo Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconimhappiestplz:
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TheMonkeysStudio Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this so far!!!!!!:D It's amazing!!! You are such a talented writer!!!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Thank you very much <3
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TheMonkeysStudio Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student General Artist
You're very welcome!!!<3
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InsaneSanity813 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've read them all so far and I'm loving them. You have a wonderful way of telling your story and it pulls me in so wonderfully. Fabulous work, really.
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Kyoux Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
^___^ Thank you very much.
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InsaneSanity813 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welx luv! Really~~
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SamuelFuery Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This chapter is one of my favorites so far. I love the way you intertwined the story with the lyrics. =)
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Kyoux Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
I'm glad, thank you ;****
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honeydrop1 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Distance makes the hart gorw fonder right? :/
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Kyoux Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
right : /
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honeydrop1 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
Loveing the story so far
ps do u right any mpreg or know who has if so pleace do tell hun :3
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Kyoux Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
mpreg?
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0uruha0 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
I read the last 3 chapters in so fast, because I love it! I always thank you for this beautiful story. But I feel a bit guilty not to thank the translator. I love him/her 2. I can read this because of him/her! So thank you!!

I love you both.

PS. Don't post that fast X3 I always have to read 2 chapters :P
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schiotka Featured By Owner May 6, 2012
haha, "her" is happy to make others happy :)
And I'm sorry that sometimes the translations are not really correct grmatically or otherwise. Giving my best though, although it is sometimes very difficult. *mwah*
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0uruha0 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
I'm already happy that someone want to translate it. I don't see that it's maybe a lil different.
It's awesome that you want to translate it and felt guilty because I'm saying this at part 10 T-T Sorry for that, and that when you are putting so much time in this.

Thank you so much <3
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schiotka Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
hey no problem at all, love you loads. I am doing it because I like the story. there's nothing to feel guilty about
*mwah*
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0uruha0 Featured By Owner May 7, 2012
I didn't even watch you o_0 But now I do X3
Your picture, I thought that it was a ninja o_0 With his face covered... But it's a book (much fantasy or something o_0) X3

But, please go on with translating it. I love the story 2 o_0 It's sooo awesome...
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Kyoux Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
That "she", great person :D

Thank you <3
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Raidu-chan Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
It's awesome! I loved how you showed the inner workings of Marcin's mind! I'm curious to see if he'll take the offer or not. >.< Amazing job as always I can't thank you enough for the translations!
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Kyoux Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
All will become clear :) Very soon :3
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Raidu-chan Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Very soon indeed! >.< (I saw it. lol)
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Kyoux Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
;*
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Jaizure Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so great(:
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Kyoux Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
:heart:
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princessofllamazz201 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
gaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh i love this story.
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Kyoux Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
:D:D:D I'm very glad :D
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