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Well, we have translated chapter : D Thanks to lovely girls.
And new girl character - Lif. : )
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The pdf-download button isn't available at the deviant-app. I have no pc and have to read it on my phone. That is a little complicated with the pdfs/download buttons.
keep writing such amazing chapters!!
I'm soo happy, because you like my story ans my style of writting.
Thank you so much for your kind words ;_:
But it's all thanks to the translator and editor.
Editor improves/fixes the mistakes
Thank you so much my dear
I really aprecciate your kind words and I'm very glad you like my story ;_:
I have a great help with translator and editor. They are doing an amazing job.
thank you again!
thank you very much
Many comments to come (mainly about Nivan) I hope at least some of them make sense.
Firstly Lif. To me she is interesting. It is nice to see Marcin from another perspective. She had a great description of him too.
I love the conversations between Niv and Marcin. They are beautiful together and this chapter showed us different sides of their relationship. Their first conversation was great.
I think I find Nivan thinking of that past dangerous and a little scary.
Nivan has skills when it comes to arguments. But his declaration was beautiful in a very Niv way.
Also "he was perfect in his imperfection" is a wonderful line.
Nivan is hard person. Little cold. In contrast to Marcin - open and warm, impulsive.
I like this line too Thank you <3