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Echo of the past 19 [ENG] by Kyoux Echo of the past 19 [ENG] by Kyoux

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Author: Kyoux
Translator: schiotka :heart:
Editor: JacquelineMonaie :heart:


:bulletred:Polish version: kyoux.deviantart.com/gallery/3… :bulletred:

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ALL TRANSLATED CHAPTERS: kyoux.deviantart.com/gallery/3…

Chapter 01 - fav.me/d4vs4xb
Chapter 19
Chapter 20 - fav.me/d5qjwmp


Descriptions of characters: kyoux.deviantart.com/journal/g…

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Well, we have translated chapter : D Thanks to lovely girls.
And new girl character - Lif. : )

Theme song: www.youtube.com/watch?v=VUD2Pb…


Please leave comment if you read : )
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:iconharunekko:
HaruNekko Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor Lif :(( But I want Marcin go back anyway x) 
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:iconmissmoxxxi:
MissMoxxxi Featured By Owner Edited Dec 29, 2014
Oh nooooo, no more drama, pleeeease... sob sob ;)

The pdf-download button isn't available at the deviant-app. I have no pc and have to read it on my phone. That is a little complicated with the pdfs/download buttons.
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Transformed-God Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
There is no pdf there( Please tel me how could I get this chapter? Can't wait to read ahead. It's so beautirful story.
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Please click "download" in right corner :) 
If will be any problem, please write to me :D
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hip-hop-beat23 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
Finally know who's Lif *^*
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:iconbatinahat:
BatInAHat Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Ah Lif what will you doooooooooo?!
Goodness, exhausted from all the feelings and emotions you depict 
With a huge thank you to the lovely individuals that translate and edit, they put in so much hard work.
I adore your writing style it is so comfortable to read

Is it bad that I want Winter to just evaporate?!
I have a bad feeling that he will do something bad to Nivan just to get Marcin to sing differently.
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Vlairebelle Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I don't have PDF :( the universe hates me
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013
You can install  this: get.adobe.com/reader/ :) It should work :)
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:iconvlairebelle:
Vlairebelle Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks!!!
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:iconhacktuih:
hacktuih Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
babe, i think you really intended to kill peeps with your masterpiece~ *dies* XDD
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redflowerblooming Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love this sooo much!!! love the fact that marcin and nivan can fight and scream at each other, but then find a way to compromise and still try to make their relationship better!!!! I hope they end up together forever!!!!! :D
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Aww, thank you :D
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xmilax Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
have you ever thought of making a facebook page or an account on twitter to spread more your work? just entered to twitter and thought maybe it didn't occur to you...
keep writing such amazing chapters!! :blowkiss:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
I thought about it. I will do it... someday xD

Thank you <3
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:iconjoaoja:
JoaoJA Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
I fel in love with Nivan even before reading your stories. But noow Ive read every chapter everything became clear and I came to love every character you've introduced. I must say you really have an interesting way of writting. Believe me I hate books and long stories make me lose interest but you managed to make me read 19 chapters of your story voluntarily, You should get a grammy for that ;). A lot of credits for the translator for doing such a great work that even I who's first langues is not english can read the storie with this much joy. ( Never found any faults in your translating I even found it funny when I read bare backing once:p) And a lot of thanks to the editor even though I dont know what an editor does. Thanku guys keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter.
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JacquelineMonaie Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
That makes my day (I am the editor) and I am sure it makes Anna's (translator) day too! She is the one who does the really hard part of turning Polish into English and then I take that and turn it into "American English" and work out the more pesky grammar rules and help with specific saying that only a native speaker would know. It is a real joy, as I too stayed up and read the whole story in one night because I couldn't put it down.
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:iconjoaoja:
JoaoJA Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
You're welcome! Both of you are doing a great work and i think i am speaking for all English talking fans. Keep it up cause you make it possible for us to enjoy this story with the rest of the polish readers. So thank you ;)
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
;_:

I'm soo happy, because you like my story ans my style of writting.

Thank you so much for your kind words ;_:

But it's all thanks to the translator and editor.
Editor improves/fixes the mistakes :)
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:iconjoaoja:
JoaoJA Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Youre welcome and thx for explaning it helped a lot!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
:heart:
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:iconberrypirate:
Berrypirate Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Spent a whole day reading this story and I love it sooo much! You are amazing! <3
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
;_:
Thank you so much!
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MadelonH Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
I have read the whole story now, from chapter 1 till the end and I just had to say a few things to you. Your story is really amazing and I loved and still love it so much.. really. I am just speechless now, I have no words to explain how much I loved it. You are really an amazing writer and I think everybody who has read your story will agree with me. And don't worry one bit about the English translation hun! I can't even speak English that well compared with your translator! c: It was absolutely perfect. The story and everything. I also adore the pictures so much. <33 You are great! And you just need to know that DEAR! U ARE FABULOUS! ;D I wanted to say awesome first but this sounded way better xD LIKE BAM!! I'm a crazy person I know :c Remember what I said about my Christmas gift? I became 100 euro's, But after all, This 2 days were my gift for Christmas. I have read your whole story in 2 days and you know, If I could, I would hug you in real and say; Thank you so much for this 2 days.. Normally I would sit behind my pc, doing nothing being to lazy for anything and being bored like hell! Day after day after day. And you gave me 2 of the best days. And I'm not exaggerating that. You're also kinda my hero. ( And your oc's ofourse they are so great I love love love them ;3; <33 ) I got one more word for you to tell: AWESOME and one word for your story: MASTERPIECE ;D Keep it up girl!! You are really To Awesome.
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
TT__________TT
Thank you so much my dear :heart:
I really aprecciate your kind words and I'm very glad you like my story ;_:

I have a great help with translator and editor. They are doing an amazing job.

thank you again!:blowkiss:
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:iconmadelonh:
MadelonH Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Yes they do c: All of you are doing a great job! And it's my pleasure dear, I said so because you simply deserve to hear words like that. Sorry if I react a lot and say a lot but I just like your whole art/story/characters so much.. ;3; <33 forgive me! ;__; Of course I like it it's the best thing I've read until now! <'33
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
:hug:

:heart: x 100 <3
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:iconmadelonh:
MadelonH Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
Nobody will own this story it's the best really (: LOVEEE NIVAN AND MARCIN! <3 - Huge Fan
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HellCrystal27 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
This is such an awesome story! :iconnosebleedingplz: It's very well written and I love your writing style and characters! :happybounce: I discovered your work only recently and I read all the chapters today (instead of doing my homework...hehe...but it was so worth it!). :love: The last two chapters were really amazing. Can't wait for the next one to be translated. Many thanks to ~schiotka and ~JacquelineMonaie for being so kind as to translate this, so more people can enjoy it. Keep up the good work! :la: And sorry for not commenting on the other chapters as well, but I wanted to write my opinion only after I read them all. ^^;
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
My english is too weak to thank you for all the kind words.

thank you very much :heart: :hug:
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HellCrystal27 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
No problem! :hug:
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YumeNouveau Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Sooooo good, man their little confession at the end was adorable, I love your boys so much :heart:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
;_: Thank you :hug:
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:iconceylion:
Ceylion Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I couldn't visit deviantart for more than half a year but what I missed most was your story ...
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
;____: <- me
Thank you! :heart:
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LonleyZombieVampire Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student
omycod, i love this so much
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
:hug:
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bluebelle-88 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
I'm so happy to finally get a new chapter. But it has been great to get all the art. To see Marcin and Niv as you do.
Many comments to come (mainly about Nivan) I hope at least some of them make sense.
Firstly Lif. To me she is interesting. It is nice to see Marcin from another perspective. She had a great description of him too.

I love the conversations between Niv and Marcin. They are beautiful together and this chapter showed us different sides of their relationship. Their first conversation was great.
I think I find Nivan thinking of that past dangerous and a little scary.
Nivan has skills when it comes to arguments. But his declaration was beautiful in a very Niv way.

Also "he was perfect in his imperfection" is a wonderful line.
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Thank you for the large comment ;_: I love extensive comment <3

Nivan is hard person. Little cold. In contrast to Marcin - open and warm, impulsive.

I like this line too :D Thank you <3
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:iconbluebelle-88:
bluebelle-88 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
You are Welcome :) I just had so much to write couldn't help myself

their relationship is a case of opposites attracting
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
:heart: :blowkiss:
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:iconelaetinuviel:
elaetinuviel Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
awww this was a really beautiful chapter, I could totally picture those fights, they were so full of emotion, I even got a little angry and sad for Marcin :love:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Nivan felt the same xD Marcin is foolish boy XD
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elaetinuviel Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
jejejejeje foolish and adorable XD (don't tell him I said that =P)
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
You're right XD (haha, ok :D)
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WildZyria Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsqueeeeplz:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
:heart:
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Nette-Yoon Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love how the story is coming i can't wait for more thank you for sharing it here
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JacquelineMonaie Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
hehe yah and I so have to finish with my part of the middle chapters!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Thank you <3
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Nette-Yoon Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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