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Echo of the past 14 [ENG]

It took 4 hours to translate this chapter

14. The Blonde

Closed eyes.
Head bent back.
Long neck.
Parted lips.

BOOM

Blonde mohawk moved swiftly.
Brows lifted the eye lids followed.
Brown gaze.
Confident and strong.
Staring.

At you.

Hand moving down the cold, vertical stand.
Slowly.
Lightly.
Delicately...

Lips.
Parted again.

Low sound.
Whisper.

Sensual.

Craned neck.
Long fingers leaving red long mark on the skin.
Sliding down the neck.
To his shoulders.

QUIET.

Stare.
At you.
As if there were only him and you.

No one else.

Quiet.
You can hear your breath.
Your heartbeat.

As if in a slow motion.
Eyes. Closing.

Echo of the past 10 [ENG]

Note from the translator:
This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing with the original. I gave my best not to change the contents BUT. Sometimes I just had to. The thing is that Kyoux is playing a lot with form and tense, and that made it that bit more difficult to translate. I wanted to leave as much as possible as it is in the original so that the atmosphere and her writing style is reflected. And that might get English people confused sometimes, as it probably would be written differently if the correct English would be used. Of course you'll find mistakes in the text, so please

Echo of the past 09 [ENG]

Note from the translator:
This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing with the original. I gave my best not to change the contents BUT. Sometimes I just had to. The thing is that Kyoux is playing a lot with form and tense, and that made it that bit more difficult to translate. I wanted to leave as much as possible as it is in the original so that the atmosphere and her writing style is reflected. And that might get English people confused sometimes, as it probably would be written differently if the correct English would be used. Of course you'll find mistakes in the text, so please

Echo of the past 08 [ENG]

Note from the translator:
This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing with the original. I gave my best not to change the contents BUT. Sometimes I just had to. The thing is that Kyoux is playing a lot with form and tense, and that made it that bit more difficult to translate. I wanted to leave as much as possible as it is in the original so that the atmosphere and her writing style is reflected. And that might get English people confused sometimes, as it probably would be written differently if the correct English would be used. Of course you'll find mistakes in the text, so please

Echo of the past 15 [ENG]

Note from the translator: It took close to 5h to translate this chapter.

15. The Blonde

"There is something.
Something that sits there... buried deep, very deep.
Covered by a layer of sand and silt. Covered by everything I was able to throw on top.

I'm pretending that it's not there.
That it never happened.

But despite that... I carry its stigma. Maybe it's not too noticeable, but it somehow shaped me... differently from how I wanted it to happen."

These words... could be said by both of them.
Him and Winter.
Marcin and him.

They both despite two different lives and different history, they have a secret.
A secret with deep roots.

Echo of the past 13 [ENG]

This piece took 7,5h to translate.

13. The Redhead

- So what now? - she asked, sitting next to Nivan.
- Well, nothing. He'll be back. And until then we'll be like a long married couple - he answered her, looking down on the unnatural order under his feet... - We'll find you a job and in the mean time we'll paint his room, maybe the rest of the flat as well.
- Ehm... - she grew sad - Nivan I don't have that much savings... I put aside something so I can visit my parents in Tunisia... And I've got Marcin's rent and that's it - she looked at her feet.
Nivan looked at her. He never saw her that depressed. He pulled her close and hugged her.

Echo of the past 12 [ENG]

Okay this is a really good chapter (well all of them are) showing that Kyoux is the Master of Suspense.
This one took 5,5 hours to translate:

12. The Blonde

I was alone in my hotel room.
I was sitting on the edge of a high bed that was probably very comfy for the rest of the world.
But not for me.

Leaning forward with arms propped on my thighs, I was looking dumbly at the white, hairy rug. I was poking at it with my foot checking how soft it was.

I felt as if I made the worst decision in my life.
And it's not about me being hundreds of kilometers from home. Immersed in a different culture, that I have no clue about, which I was never

Echo of the past 05 [ENG]

Chapter with better formatting, in PDF file: http://xkyoux.wordpress.com/2012/05/09/story-about-boys-love/

*Author notes available at the beginning of chapter one*

Note from the translator: This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing the original. I tried my best not to change the contents. BUT, sometimes I just had to. The thing is that Kyoux plays a lot with form and tense, and that made it that much more difficult to translate. I wanted to leave as much as possible as it was in the original so that the atmosphere and her writing style were reflected. And that might get English pe

Echo of the past 17 [ENG]

Note from translator and author: this chapter took 6h to translate. I know my translations are not perfect. Try it yourself. I'm no genius. Just a fan ; )
Before you start reading the second part [starting with words: "three days..."]
please listen to the soundtrack, link to which you can find down below under the first star.

17. Marcin

- Ohhh...You look terribly awful - said the light haired man as a means of saying hello, standing in the opened door, that only a few days ago were a gateway to freedom.
In the newcomers voice you couldn't actually find an ounce of pity, that the words said in Norwegian, might have suggested. The man pre

Echo of the past 07 [ENG]

Note from the translator:
This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing with the original. I gave my best not to change the contents BUT. Sometimes I just had to. The thing is that Kyoux is playing a lot with form and tense, and that made it that bit more difficult to translate. I wanted to leave as much as possible as it is in the original so that the atmosphere and her writing style is reflected. And that might get English people confused sometimes, as it probably would be written differently if the correct English would be used. Of course you'll find mistakes in the text, so please

Echo of the past 03 [ENG]

Chapter with better formatting, in PDF file: http://xkyoux.wordpress.com/2012/05/09/story-about-boys-love/

*Author notes available at the beginning of chapter one*

Note from the translator:
This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing with the original. I gave my best not to change the contents, BUT sometimes I just had to. Of course you'll find mistakes in the text, so please instead of mocking my language skills, just sit back and enjoy a beautiful love story. I decided to try to translate it because I adore their story so much. It would be a pity for others not to be able to read

Nivan's dream

Nivan's Dream

It was one of those realistic ones.
I mean... everything was so damn realistic in it, but in the real world its probability is less than nil.
Normally after dreams like that, when I wake up, I'm happy that in the end it was only the work of my imagination.
But today it was the other way around.
And I'm a bit shocked by that realisation.

The dream was a bit like a movie, like a slide show.
I had my own place but I lived alone. And that's not a promising outlook for the future. No matter how you look at it. The dream was abstract enough to hold on to the hope that the reality will be different. And I was older, not by much

Echo of the past 04 [ENG]

Chapter with better formatting, in PDF file: http://xkyoux.wordpress.com/2012/05/09/story-about-boys-love/

*Author notes available at the beginning of chapter one*

Note from the translator: This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing the original. I tried my best not to change the contents. BUT, sometimes I just had to. The thing is that Kyoux plays a lot with form and tense, and that made it that much more difficult to translate. I wanted to leave as much as possible as it was in the original so that the atmosphere and her writing style were reflected. And that might get English pe

Echo of the past 02 [ENG]

Chapter with better formatting, in PDF file: http://xkyoux.wordpress.com/2012/05/09/story-about-boys-love/

*Author notes available at the beginning of chapter one*

Note from the translator:
This is not a word for word translation. So there will be words missing, or words added when comparing with the original. I gave my best not to change the contents, BUT sometimes I just had to. Of course you'll find mistakes in the text, so please instead of mocking my language skills, just sit back and enjoy a beautiful love story. I decided to try to translate it because I adore their story so much. It would be a pity for others not to be able to read

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~Akijura Apr 18, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Oooow my favourite chapter until now <3 It really amazes me how you write; your style of writing, how you form all the characters and especially how real you express the character's emotions. In some parts while reading their personality seem so alive for me... I really love your two boys here

And a biiig thank you to the translator of course c: I'm looking forward to the next chapter (:

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*Kyoux May 12, 2013

Thank you very much my dear <3
This means a lot for me

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~Akijura May 13, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

You're so welcome <3
I just decided to draw them both as I saw the update of your journal c': Hope I'll get it, I'm not that good at doing fanart xD

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*ANIMAfelis Mar 28, 2013 Professional General Artist

Aaaaaa! Cliffhanger! When is the next one due? Come on Author and translation team! I'll give you virtual cookies and llamas for more of the boys!

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*Kyoux Apr 1, 2013

Haha XD Sorry!

I hope so that will bbe soon... I'm very busy at now ;_:

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*ANIMAfelis Apr 1, 2013 Professional General Artist

I'll be on the lookout, no worries!
Keep it up, team!

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~crysanthemum963 Mar 24, 2013

I just love these characters. Thanks for this chapter!

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~Lulash Mar 18, 2013

I love your work so much thank you for sharing it with us!
Is the orginal echo of the past finished your do you still work on it? And about how many chapters will follow? I'm so curious, because your story is so incredible good.
Much love <3

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