You really understand how a human works, and that isn't as easy as you'd think. The way you make your characters communicate, and the way you show a story without telling everything... it's so brilliantly done. And the fact that the story has this dark kind of misty atmosphere - it's not just sunshine, rainbows and happiness. I like that you can make it so bittersweet, even though the drama sometimes makes me want to throw my computer out the window. Still, I can't stop reading it. And that, dear you, is powerful writing.
I now have read all 23 chapters so far, and I must say that is the best I have read in a looong time (and I read a lot). Please keep up with this good work, you got one fan more xD *sorry for the retarded english* cheers