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Echo of the past 23 [ENG] by Kyoux Echo of the past 23 [ENG] by Kyoux

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Author: Kyoux
Translator: schiotka :heart:
Editor: JacquelineMonaie :heart: [mid correction]

The correction is not completed, but I know that you are getting impatient, so I send it ;)

:bulletred:Polish version: kyoux.deviantart.com/gallery/3… :bulletred:

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ALL TRANSLATED CHAPTERS: kyoux.deviantart.com/gallery/3…

Chapter 01 - fav.me/d4vs4xb
Chapter 23
Chapter 24 - fav.me/d72ov51

Descriptions of characters: kyoux.deviantart.com/journal/g…

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:iconjesszo:
JesszO Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
11years old Nivan and Marcin! *-------------* please you have to draw it! Ha ha so cute! >w<
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BatInAHat Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Aaaaaaaaaaaaa such an emotional rollercoaster.
They are so complicated.
Again another chapter of angst and joy poetry flowing from your fingertips Kyoux
Hang in there Marcin you adorable wildcat princess you.

All the love to schiotka and JacquelineMonaie thank you for your hard work too
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Anna-95 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You really understand how a human works, and that isn't as easy as you'd think. The way you make your characters communicate, and the way you show a story without telling everything... it's so brilliantly done. And the fact that the story has this dark kind of misty atmosphere - it's not just sunshine, rainbows and happiness. I like that you can make it so bittersweet, even though the drama sometimes makes me want to throw my computer out the window. Still, I can't stop reading it. And that, dear you, is powerful writing.
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:iconrhage-kun:
Rhage-kun Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
I'm addict and this story is my drug!! Woohooooo! I luv it.. and you too Wink/Razz 
Thank you for your hard work and please continue...
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
:hug: Thank you
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:iconrhage-kun:
Rhage-kun Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Heart 
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:iconzusacre:
Zusacre Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I now have read all 23 chapters so far, and I must say that is the best I have read in a looong time (and I read a lot). Please keep up with this good work, you got one fan more xD
*sorry for the retarded english* :D
cheers
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Aww, thank you so much :D
I'm so happy :hug:
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:iconvlairebelle:
Vlairebelle Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh yay! Finally we get to find out what happened!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
:D
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:iconphixuscarus:
phixuscarus Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013   Digital Artist
Nooooo cliffhangerrrrrr!

I just knew your story in less than 12 hours ago. Stumbled your art of Nivan on accident, browse through your gallery and found this breathtaking story afsajfshfs. Aah Niv & Marcin I love them both ♥♥
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
:heart: Thank you my dear. I'm glad that you hooked on my story XD.


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:iconphixuscarus:
phixuscarus Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013   Digital Artist
I should thank YOU for having them translated to English :heart:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
All thanks belong to :iconschiotka:. She translated this story :D

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:iconphixuscarus:
phixuscarus Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013   Digital Artist
Oh yes *0*. I didn't mean to forget the translator & editor altogether for allowing us to enjoy the story; ~schiotka & ~JacquelineMonaie~

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JacquelineMonaie Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks! Sometimes RL gets in the way of getting my editing done, but I try to be quick about it as I know you are all drooling for the next chapter :)
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
:blowkiss:
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:iconschiotka:
schiotka Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
thanks and hugsKisu 
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:iconmaeya-divyana:
Maeya-Divyana Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
Breathless... you're killing me here... LOL!!
I came across your story totally by accident - was just looking through random CG arts, and stumbled across "I'm fine, you fool!" And before I know it, I read the whole 23 chapters in 2 days... but why do I have a sinking something bad is about to happen to Niv and Marcin :(

Have mercy...~~~

LOVE your art work.
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Thank you :D
I'm happy taht you like my story, and arts, really :heart:
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:iconlynuth:
LyNuth Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student General Artist
I have to say all this:

I LOVE your characters, they became pretty real which is awesome. And they have the same 'vibe' of a character I design recently x'D (maybe that's why I like them all so much)

Love your style, keep the hard work. 

Although the story was quite confusing at first, it got be hooked and I ended enjoying the way you write, so I'll be here for every new chapter. 

I been following you for a while, so I had to tell you all this at some point xD

:iconluvluvplz:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Heart bum 
Thank you so much my dear. 
I'm happy. 
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:icondlenneth:
DLenneth Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
Como queria essa fic em portuguÍs D:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Maybe someday :C
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:iconlonleyzombievampire:
LonleyZombieVampire Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student
ooh the ending though!! :iconflailgasmplz:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Evil master of cliffhanger
XD

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:iconhacktuih:
hacktuih Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
who the phuck that hurt ma Marcin~ D:< ~!!!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Killim! Killim them! 
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:iconhacktuih:
hacktuih Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
i'll slap his lil 'brother' till it wilt~! D:< (ehm...~~using ma toilet slippers okay~ ;DD)
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:iconartisanelizarose:
ArtisanElizaRose Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student General Artist
OH MY SWEET JESUS WHO THE FUCK HURT MARCI AND WHERE DO I KILL HIM?
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
kill the dead 
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:iconartisanelizarose:
ArtisanElizaRose Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student General Artist
<3
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:iconanimafelis:
ANIMAfelis Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
Oh, this was a nice comeback, especially after the last chapter's cliffhanger, of sorts. I can't wait for the next one!
Damned boys and their damned pride~
<3
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Haha :D I know, I'm little bitchy xD I like cliffhanger. 

Thank you :love:
 

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:iconanimafelis:
ANIMAfelis Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Professional General Artist
You're welcome, my dear bitchy friend! :P

Keep up the good work! :heart:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Hihi :D Thank you :D
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Fragile-Fragrance Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
holy shiiiiit that was awesome awesome AWESOME!!!!! the wait was SO worth it!!! <3333 and only confused for a second that Marcin wanted to top Nivan :DD that's something to imagine :D
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
I think so too, hrhr :hypereyes: 

:hug:
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:iconena-rae:
Ena-Rae Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your chapters are always worth the wait, but now I am wanting to read the next one right now!!! I really want to know more about Marcin's troubled past, and who hurt him..... Poor snake boy.
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Thank you my dear. I'll try to write as soon as possible ;)
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:iconena-rae:
Ena-Rae Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No thank you :heart: :heart:
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XsilverghostX Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Someone's gonna die today. Nivan isn't pleased with this new information.
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Right on target! :D
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GreyCat21 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god you are the most amazing writer ever! :squee: :heart: You simply have no idea how much I love your story, you are simply the BEST!!!!!!!!!!! :faint: 
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
:,) Thank you so much!
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Coppeh-and-Paste Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeees, patiently waiting for each and every new page is worth it! god i love this chapter so much
i think you're writing is absolutely perfect, especially building up the tension and emotions :heart:

and oh no, poor Marcin! if it is what i think it is when he said to Niv "you are the first person to actually respect my will when it comes to sex".... oh dear little Marcin ;___;

wonderful chapter, i can't wait until the next! :hug:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
Thank you so much my dear ;__: :glomp:
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:iconbabakosen:
BabakoSen Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconovariesplz: Oh god yes...
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
:D
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:iconbabakosen:
BabakoSen Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dammit, I wanna read all of them right now, but...homework...eeuuughhhh :cries:
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