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Echo of the past 25 [ENG] by Kyoux Echo of the past 25 [ENG] by Kyoux

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Author: Kyoux
Translator: schiotka
Editor: JacquelineMonaie

Thank you for your patience :heart:

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ALL TRANSLATED CHAPTERS: kyoux.deviantart.com/gallery/3…
Chapter 01 - fav.me/d4vs4xb
Chapter 25
Chapter 26 - fav.me/d7kv6xi

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:iconharunekko:
HaruNekko Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
iron man's references huh Icon popo 
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:iconjesszo:
JesszO Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Now i get it! ... I just fall in love with Marcin. There is some kind of thing about he, that makes me think that he is the stronger one. Lovely
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ANIMAfelis Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Professional General Artist
Oh, noes, Alex! What are you about to do??

Also, who on earth has been spying on Marcin in the last page? <Insert thickening plot here>

You're killing us here, Kyoux! XD
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:iconxmilax:
xmilax Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
SPOILER - PART OF THECHAPTER
Marcin came back home from work.
Nivan saw the regret in him. He regretted what he did...the kiss...what he said.

He didn’t push.

He pretended just like him that nothing happened.
Although there was something inside him that... weird…

As if…
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I don't think I get this part, mind explaining?
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:iconekaniki:
ekaniki Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
new chapter
pleeeeease
Worship Worship Worship Worship 
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:iconekaniki:
ekaniki Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014
Hug thank you Heart Heart Heart 
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:iconadelphobates:
Adelphobates Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
Don't mind me. I am just sitting here looking menacing in the wait for a new chapter.
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:iconstern-des-meeres:
Stern-des-Meeres Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Student
Love this story soo much ...

Common wheres the next chapter *begging*??
You can't keep us waiting for so long Waaaah! 
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
fav.me/d7kv6xi Here you are :>
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:iconstern-des-meeres:
Stern-des-Meeres Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student
OMG you're the best Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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:icondecemberxdie:
DECEMBERxDIE Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Oh my god please tell me there will be more chapters !
I discovered that there was actually a story going with your perfect drawings just yesterday and couldn't get my eyes of it, I love how you write your characters and their relationships, it just feels so true.
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
The next chapter is in the editing :)

Thank you so much :D
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:icondecemberxdie:
DECEMBERxDIE Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Great !! Can't wait to read it.
I'm re-reading the whole story in the meantime and it's even more amazing on 2nd reading ('cause I'm actually taking my time and enjoying the details, not reading it as fast as I can to know what happens just like I did the 1st time :p)
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
fav.me/d7kv6xi Here you are :D
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:iconskinnetblack:
SkinnetBlack Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
this can't be the end!!!!!!!!!!!! You have to continude ! Pleeeeease
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
The next chapter is in the editing :)
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SkinnetBlack Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
ooops i didnt say anything ^^ sorry


and wooohooo <3 i can read one more chapter
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x-Uchiwa-x Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
You are an amazing artist and writer!
Yesterday I found your story and I read it in one run... I was up till 5am because I couldn't stop readingLove 

You put so much effort and thought in every character that they seem so real. It's possible to relate to them. And I did relate to them a lot... the whole long distance "relationship" almost made me cry because many of the things Nivan and Marcin lived through I know from my own experience. For example something happend to the other one but the distance makes it impossible to be there for them or to see each other after a long time again and realizing that it was just a dream that all problems suddenly vanish into thin air... to the contrary they just coming back all at once and twice as hard.
But enough from that Sweating a little...

Keep up your wonderful work and your lovely characters! I can't wait to see what direction their relationship takes and what else they have to live through. I reallly hope that they can be happy for a while and please don't let Winter destroy their relationship... if it ends on a "natural" way it's ok but not because of such a douchebag (sorry, Winter is the character I like the least No, I disagree! )

Heart 
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BahamutDeusModus Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
Whoa, whoa, whoa! That ending! Don't stop it there!!! :faint:
I can't believe it took me this long to take the time to read this chapter; it was great. Keep it up!
(And dammit, Marcin and Nivan are both so stubborn!!! :stare:)
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Thank you so much :D
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:iconbahamutdeusmodus:
BahamutDeusModus Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
You're welcome! :la: And happy belated birthday as well! :glomp:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
:hug:
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danyyel2 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Hei, what's your favourite character? :D
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Nivan :D
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:icondanyyel2:
danyyel2 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
nais :)) mi tu
ai hev oan pis ov him in mai iunivers :)
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:icondezirea:
Dezirea Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
This story pulls on my heart strings! Where is Chapter 26?
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Thank you :D
Soon it will be on the page. 
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AaexX Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Oh My Dear God I just cant take this anymore!!! I swear this is on of the best stories in the world and i just cant take how beyond spectacular everything about it is. Love I am a dummy!  And that cliff hanger, damn, swear it killed me

I cant thank you enough, Kyoux, for putting so much dedication into this story for all of us. And the same goes for the translator and editor!!! 
Thankyou!!! :happybounce: Hug so much love
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
:blowkiss: Thank you my dear
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elaetinuviel Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Nuu  holly sh......!!!!! 
Those are the only words coming to my mind.
I love this chapter!!!!!! I'm liking Marcin more and more :love: I can't wait to read more Woohooooo! 
You are amaizing :huggle:
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
I'm glad you like it 
Thank you :D
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GreyCat21 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AAAAA this is torture, too much suspense, now I will be on pins and needles for the next month O_O" 

Amazing story :dance:  You have the gift of Hemingway of describing a whole scene in just one or two sentences, simply amazing! And the most emotionally charged yet realistic sounding dialogue I have ever read! :squee: :squee: :squee: :squee: Taking my hat off to your talent :heart: 
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Aww, thank you so much my dear :glomp:
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s0phus Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
I was on the edge of my seat the entire 28 pages!Woohooooo!  It was fun 'the game' Marcin enforced upon them. It's a bliss - the story. Thank you for being so awesome!I am a dummy!   
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Thank you that you are reading my story
:hug:
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:iconlynuth:
LyNuth Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student General Artist
This chapter is so intense! Such tension between the two </3

A;dsg;uadsd What will Marcin do? will he actually listen Niv story without his consent?! How will he react....!

Oh my... so many questions. I will have to learn polish :P

I love how real your characters are. 
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Haha, I recommend the Polish language, although it is difficult... (but for me, however, English is more difficult xD)

:hug:
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Ravenjr Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist
I...just fell from that cliff...and DIED.
wonderful work as always!!
Big Fool Emoji-24 (No words) [V4] CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
A new chapter is in the editing :D
Thank you my dear :hug:
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:iconcatoya:
Catoya Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Wow as before, faster editing! 

Getting really interesting and cannot wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work and stay brave!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Thank you my dear :hug:
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:iconxmilax:
xmilax Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You don't know how much I waited for this...And it was worth it!!!! The story gets more and more intresting!! Congrats, it a really absorbing story and it only gets better.
I can truly say I'm glad I found it.
Can't wait for the next one!!
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:iconkyoux:
Kyoux Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
A new chapter is in the editing :D

Thank you :hug:
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:iconkaliew:
KalieW Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait for the next one! *.*
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