Omg THIS ENDING.... The feels/The drama/The secrets/The lies/ The memories of the past that keep coming back and hunt them down ~~ JUST EVERYTHING IS TOUCHING MY HEART <'33 T___T I can't wait for the next part!!!! (DYING TO READ IT) And god Winter is such an evil bad ass xDD | SPOILER ALERT | I was sitting here like: RAV.... WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING THERE??? YOU JERK... HOW COULD YOU...
I'm really addicted to your story ;-;' It's like drugs XDDD And chocolate ( I have a very bad addiction to chocolate.. It's not good for me xDD ) GOD THIS STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AND SO DO YOU MY DEAR!! GO ON WITH THE GOOD WORK <3 ;D I will always cheer you on here!!! Because you deserve it.
I really like this chapter; it's possibly my favourite of all I like the growth that Marcin shows throughout (I love him, but honestly, he was kind of a dick in previous chapters), and I love his rare triumphs over Nivan (like when Niv finally snapped and admitted to being a hacker. omg. Best moment of my life. Marcin's response was so mature and composed- it was beautiful to read).
Something I find interesting, though, is the different way I interpret Nivan's character in the Polish and English versions (I usually Google Translate the new Polish chapters because I'm impatient and have too much free time xD). I don't know why, but in the Polish version, Nivan seems far more threatening. More menacing. For example, in the conversations between him and Rott, I actually get scared. I don't feel that in the English version; he's more ... not timid, but he just seems like a nicer person. Like, in the Polish version he seems really comfortable with the dangerous life he leads, but in the English translation sometimes I feel like he's worried or even scared. Haha, I can't really explain it, it's probably just because I can't completely understand the Polish so I jump to conclusions xD
This chapter was awesome! Marcin was so beautiful in his actions and speeches. Alex, thank you for putting some constructive thoughts in Nivan 's head! ^^ I also wanted to say a few words about the translation. This is going better and better, mistakes are now very slight and the chapters are nice to read. Thanks to the translator for alowing us to be able to enjoy your amazing work and characters.