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Still, this is a story, that's touching on so many levels...
but it's drawing back painful memories and feelings of mine.
thus i'm not able to finish reading. I'm sorry.
Nevertheless it's beautiful.
I can say that this is my favorite original story in the whole internet <3 Including pages like fanfiction, etc.
I follow it since years now, but I stayed in chapter 24.
Today I had the chance to look for it and I started to read with a smile on my face but I didn'y expect this!!!
How the f*uck am I suppost to go home now? I look like some kind of lunatic right now and I'm at uni!!
This is the most awesome yet disturbing plot twist ever! Ooohh myyy poor Niv my baby </3
You do such a perfect work, full of passion. I have real feelings for these characters... how did you do that?
You are a wizard, my friend.
This story is really amazing. I just love your OC's (They're both soooo stubborn but I love 'em ) I hope you update soon .. just one chapter left
I'm really addicted to your story ;-;' It's like drugs XDDD And chocolate ( I have a very bad addiction to chocolate.. It's not good for me xDD ) GOD THIS STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AND SO DO YOU MY DEAR!! GO ON WITH THE GOOD WORK <3 ;D I will always cheer you on here!!! Because you deserve it.
Keep up your great work, this is an amazing story <3
Something I find interesting, though, is the different way I interpret Nivan's character in the Polish and English versions (I usually Google Translate the new Polish chapters because I'm impatient and have too much free time xD). I don't know why, but in the Polish version, Nivan seems far more threatening. More menacing. For example, in the conversations between him and Rott, I actually get scared. I don't feel that in the English version; he's more ... not timid, but he just seems like a nicer person. Like, in the Polish version he seems really comfortable with the dangerous life he leads, but in the English translation sometimes I feel like he's worried or even scared. Haha, I can't really explain it, it's probably just because I can't completely understand the Polish so I jump to conclusions xD
This is overkill!
I also wanted to say a few words about the translation. This is going better and better, mistakes are now very slight and the chapters are nice to read. Thanks to the translator for alowing us to be able to enjoy your amazing work and characters.
i could kiss you <3 my favorite character is back <3
This was SUCH A GOOD TWIST! I was not expecting something like that, at all (even though some people say they did). I think it makes it very interesting and puts a lot into the actual threat behind this beautiful boys.
This is getting very interesting. I am very excited to find out about everything that is still unclear. That says this is a good story.
Best wishes for you, and hope to see more of your wonderful art.
Oh my God, Nivan and Marcin! They gotta watch out for this!
Poor Batman T^T
I actually thought Rav was probably alive.
Nivan you better protect Marcin
As always each chapter is so rich in depth and detail
I try to be patient but always want the next chapter as soon as possible OTL
Keep up the fantastic work and I look forward to seeing what happens next time.
Well, the story is worth it, keep it up!
And Kyoux is the best author, hehe~
I'm looking forward to the next chapter *party*
P.S. You still are a devious human! Have you ever heard of gorge rr martin, the one that wrote game of thrones. You two are alike in thinking. I liked Batman why did you killed him( yeah i get he was a catalyst for Niv going home but... you killed a bunny!!! bunnies are the sign of peace www.facebook.com/IFeakingLoveS… <- if you do not believe me, science says so! )?! Please do not kill Marcin's snake :< he is too cute.
Anyway hope to read soon and have a nice day
this was beautifully written as always..
and the ending--ah I was left speechless for at least a good minute xD.
Thank you for writing this story~! And your editor is wonderful as well ^^.
Don't know if I will be able to survive the wait until the next chapter is published xD
(omg cliffie /dead)
It always made me wonder why Winter was so after Marcin so sometimes I really thought about some connection to sonia, but this made me speechless xD
You need to continue. I mean you really have to. Not sometime but really NOW ...
I think I'm dying with that cliffhanger here.
Just so at the sideline, it's lovely how Marcin won Nivan over. How he manipulated him. I'm curius at how Nivan will tell Marcin about his past and what happened there with Rav.
AND I really can't wait for Niv and Rav to meet up
It's important to edit carefully and make sure the story is correct in its punctuation so as not to distract from the piece itself; there's a note in the forward that says "Ignore the errors and focus on the story," but more often than not the lack of errors is what enables the reader to focus on the story. I hope the editor takes that advice to heart; it's something I've really learned a lot about after working on a literary magazine for several years.
Anyway, best of luck with the rest of the translations! I hope this was at least a bit helpful.
myślałam, że po polsku...
ale i tak Cię kocham!
Really, thank you for writing such an amazing story. This is one of very few pieces that keep me interested and on the edge, always hungry.
I love you character development, how they change throughout the story and how they react to each other. It's very easy to connect to them and be captivated by them.
With each chapter the plot thickens without losing its intensity, and I can't possibly see what will you come up with next! So just keep it coming! \(^_^)/