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Author: Kyoux
Translator: schiotka
Editor: JacquelineMonaie

Thank you for your patience :heart:

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Chapter 01 -
Chapter 26 
Chapter 27 -

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HaruNekko Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FINALLY ! But what the hell is going on ??? I was sure of it but OMG 
Bee047 Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I can't stop reading! I've downloaded all the chapters so far, so I can read them at home (nope, I don't have Internet at home, not using it often enough), and I try not to read too much at a time to keep the pleasure lasting, but it's just too great!!! You are a wonderful writer, and I want to say a very big BRAVO and thank you to schiotka for patiently translating this delightful story, and to JacquelineMonaie too for her great editing work, so now we can all read it! :heart: 
Tenkamchi-Sama Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist

Still, this is a story, that's touching on so many levels...

but it's drawing back painful memories and feelings of mine.

thus i'm not able to finish reading. I'm sorry.

Nevertheless it's beautiful.
AzhaliUsagi Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015
I have to admit that, for many personal reasons, I didn't stay updated with this awesome story.
I can say that this is my favorite original story in the whole internet <3 Including pages like fanfiction, etc.
I follow it since years now, but I stayed in chapter 24. 
Today I had the chance to look for it and I started to read with a smile on my face but I didn'y expect this!!! 
How the f*uck am I suppost to go home now? I look like some kind of lunatic right now and I'm at uni!!
This is the most awesome yet disturbing plot twist ever! Ooohh myyy poor Niv my baby </3 
You do such a perfect work, full of passion. I have real feelings for these characters... how did you do that? 
You are a wizard, my friend.
JesszO Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Very very deep inside i knew it... But Dont want to admit it.............. Nah! I Just couldn't stop saying oh! Shit! Wtf? Oh my godsh! What the hell? And slapping myself with wide open and terrific eyes! .... Winter is a bad ass by the way I really hope he just die in a stupid way... Ha ha ha thanks for the amazing chapter!
Mausii0815 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist
OMG! I was completely shocked. I just thought: WHAT THE HELL?! What is rav doinig there?! .. He rose from the dead!! ..

This story is really amazing. I just love your OC's (They're both soooo stubborn but I love 'em :D (Big Grin) Heart ) I hope you update soon .. just one chapter left Waaaah! 
ArtisanElizaRose Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Done. I quit. T.T
MadelonH Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
Omg THIS ENDING.... The feels/The drama/The secrets/The lies/ The memories of the past that keep coming back and hunt them down  ~~ JUST EVERYTHING IS TOUCHING MY HEART <'33 T___T I can't wait for the next part!!!! (DYING TO READ IT) And god Winter is such an evil bad ass xDD | SPOILER ALERT | I was sitting here like: RAV.... WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING THERE??? YOU JERK... HOW COULD YOU...

I'm  really addicted to your story ;-;' It's like drugs XDDD And chocolate ( I have a very bad addiction to chocolate.. It's not good for me xDD ) GOD THIS STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AND SO DO YOU MY DEAR!! GO ON WITH THE GOOD WORK <3 ;D I will always cheer you on here!!! Because you deserve it.
SwedishDiary Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
God, this is so exciting! I can't wait to see how Nivan reacts! I feel sorry for him but also I'm happy that Rav isn't actually dead :)
Keep up your great work, this is an amazing story <3
Pasadera Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this chapter; it's possibly my favourite of all :) I like the growth that Marcin shows throughout (I love him, but honestly, he was kind of a dick in previous chapters), and I love his rare triumphs over Nivan (like when Niv finally snapped and admitted to being a hacker. omg. Best moment of my life. Marcin's response was so mature and composed- it was beautiful to read). 

Something I find interesting, though, is the different way I interpret Nivan's character in the Polish and English versions (I usually Google Translate the new Polish chapters because I'm impatient and have too much free time xD). I don't know why, but in the Polish version, Nivan seems far more threatening. More menacing. For example, in the conversations between him and Rott, I actually get scared. I don't feel that in the English version; he's more ... not timid, but he just seems like a nicer person. Like, in the Polish version he seems really comfortable with the dangerous life he leads, but in the English translation sometimes I feel like he's worried or even scared. Haha, I can't really explain it, it's probably just because I can't completely understand the Polish so I jump to conclusions xD 
ANIMAfelis Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Professional General Artist
This is overkill!
xmilax Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
omg I sooo wanna know what happens at that dinner andwith winter!!!!!!!!!! <3
rabbitpostiche Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
This chapter was awesome! Marcin was so beautiful in his actions and speeches. Alex, thank you for putting some constructive thoughts in Nivan 's head! ^^
I also wanted to say a few words about the translation. This is going better and better, mistakes are now very slight and the chapters are nice to read. Thanks to the translator for alowing us to be able to enjoy your amazing work and characters.
IndigoSummerr Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I can only agree! :)
gotta love marcin for his confidence in his speeches! :love:
bsdinnan Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
SkinnetBlack Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
iknew it  i knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i could kiss you <3   my favorite character is back <3    =D
elaetinuviel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Holly sh*****!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if I love you or hate you...... You're amaizing!!!!!!!! It's going to be a torture to wait for the next chapter :huggle: :love: 
NaNaLollipops Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist
Please, write as quick as you can, I really need it. Love you SO much. <3 Marcin and Nivan have just become my new platonic loves
LonleyZombieVampire Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student
DUUUUUUUUDE. the end though :iconamgplz:
LyNuth Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student General Artist
I felt waiting for this new chapter was long, just because of my curiosity... but NOW I will just go insane! Hahaha but I know it takes time to translate, and I am forever thankful that they take the time to do it! 

This was SUCH A GOOD TWIST! I was not expecting something like that, at all (even though some people say they did). I think it makes it very interesting and puts a lot into the actual threat behind this beautiful boys. 

This is getting very interesting. I am very excited to find out about everything that is still unclear. That says this is a good story.

Best wishes for you, and hope to see more of your wonderful art.
BahamutDeusModus Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
What?! WHAT?!?! Can you repeat yourself and tell me who was standing there again? :faint:
Oh my God, Nivan and Marcin! :nuu: They gotta watch out for this!  Time to haul ass out of here! 
BatInAHat Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Oh my goodness :iconcannotevenplz:

Poor Batman T^T

I actually thought Rav was probably alive.
Nivan you better protect Marcin :stare:

As always each chapter is so rich in depth and detail
I try to be patient but always want the next chapter as soon as possible OTL
Keep up the fantastic work and I look forward to seeing what happens next time.
xmilax Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I never really understood why Winter was so interested in Marcin but I guess this is somewhat an explanation. Great story and plot twist! The only thing I don't like is how fast I read the chapters and how long I have to wait 'till the next one...
Well, the story is worth it, keep it up!
C4lpol Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Photographer
.... :O ....
ekaniki Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
not enough Grump 
need more Worship Worship 
danielluster81 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That's a really nice picture.Love Love Love Love 
Pasadera Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god, amazing as always XDDDDDDD Such an intense chapter; I was almost sweating by the end! And that cliffhanger.. why.. why do you do this to us? D: Thank you to everyone involved in writing, translating and editing this story, we appreciate all the work that goes into it. Marcin is the best character ever. I love him so much. Really :3
And Kyoux is the best author, hehe~ 
I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D *party* 
Adelphobates Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Read it! Love the turn the story took with Rav being reintroduced as alive but not so well.  I swear that I will not read this until there are at least 3 chapters piled up. Reading one pice at a time is destroying my mind... I even went so far as checking the deviant art site more times a day than I check my facebook. It is an addiction. THIS IS BAD so I will wait (not too long, I hope for 3 more chapters).
P.S. You still are a devious human! Have you ever heard of gorge rr martin, the one that wrote game of thrones. You two are alike in thinking. I liked Batman why did you killed him( yeah i get he was a catalyst for Niv going home but... you killed a bunny!!! bunnies are the sign of peace… <- if you do not believe me, science says so! )?! Please do not kill Marcin's snake :< he is too cute.
Anyway hope to read soon and have a nice day
crysanthemum963 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
this was beautifully written as always..:heart:
and the ending--ah I was left speechless for at least a good minute xD.
Thank you for writing this story~! And your editor is wonderful as well ^^.
DECEMBERxDIE Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Don't know if I will be able to survive the wait until the next chapter is published xD
Dezirea Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Fuchsteufelswild Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
exactly my reaction..! O.O
LonleyZombieVampire Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student
Death-by-KIRA Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaah! I can't believe you just left me with that cliff hanger! Super looking forward to the next part now. The way you write is just so much fun to read! :)
CrimsonnRain Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What the what?! DDDD: 
demonunicorn Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
Waited so long! But YAAAY thank you! <3
lisztomanic Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
dun dun dunnnnnnn

(omg cliffie /dead)
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student Filmographer
I like her hair reminds me of :iconxmenstormplz:
Catoya Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
And so we begin waiting again for the next chapter. Thanks to you and everyone working your project to give us english readers this lovely story.
Stern-des-Meeres Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student
Damn it, here I was waiting for that sooo long and now I think I have to wait even longer. That cliffhanger is really the worst ...
It always made me wonder why Winter was so after Marcin so sometimes I really thought about some connection to sonia, but this made me speechless xD Heart Heart 
You need to continue. I mean you really have to. Not sometime but really NOW ... Waaaah! 
I think I'm dying with that cliffhanger here.

Just so at the sideline, it's lovely how Marcin won Nivan over. How he manipulated him. I'm curius at how Nivan will tell Marcin about his past and what happened there with Rav.
AND I really can't wait for Niv and Rav to meet up I think I've fainted. 
Azazelleeblis Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
wow this is such a mindfuck!!! amazing story oh I hope it doesn\t end dramatic cause it would break my heart :s
CaptainSpaceFucker Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Even if the spaces and tense changes are part of the artist's original vision, the piece is still quite full of punctuation errors. There are a lot of missing possessive apostrophes, indentations (every line of new dialogue should be indented, and so should the start of every new paragraph), and there are various issues with the capitalization of different words after a dialogue tag. Also, such words as "straightaway" are actually two words, "straight away" is the correct version. This happens a few times in the piece with other phrases.

It's important to edit carefully and make sure the story is correct in its punctuation so as not to distract from the piece itself; there's a note in the forward that says "Ignore the errors and focus on the story," but more often than not the lack of errors is what enables the reader to focus on the story. I hope the editor takes that advice to heart; it's something I've really learned a lot about after working on a literary magazine for several years. :)

Anyway, best of luck with the rest of the translations! I hope this was at least a bit helpful.
psoty Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
no nie. fałszywy alarm.
myślałam, że po polsku...
ale i tak Cię kocham! :hug:
KeiraStar Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I've waited for this for so long and now I read it way too fast, boo hoo :D But it was awesome, as always... The ending of the chapter really shocked me!! Epic stuff. 
s0phus Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
VarahilKirin Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student General Artist
I've waited so long for this chapter, and now that I see you've created such a cliffhanger I can't possibly be patient. Amazing! :D
Really, thank you for writing such an amazing story. This is one of very few pieces that keep me interested and on the edge, always hungry.
I love you character development, how they change throughout the story and how they react to each other. It's very easy to connect to them and be captivated by them.
With each chapter the plot thickens without losing its intensity, and I can't possibly see what will you come up with next! So just keep it coming! \(^_^)/ :D
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